Below are the three paintings that were picked by another student
Her favorite. She likes the sticks and the pattern of motion. She said it looks like the closure principle, like as if it is falling. It reminded her of weird looking toothpicks. And each mark had a nice evenness of darkness. And she also said I could make it better by adding a few smaller marks here and there.
Second Place. She likes the pattern of the painting, and how it has very few angles that are not exactly 90 degrees. It reminds her of the antenna on top of a battle ship. But she said I could improve it by making it a bit straighter.
Third Place. This one was a folded sheet of paper. She likes the pattern of it and how the paint and pattern of it stays with the creases. But however, not every crease has ink in it. It has lots of light marks in a swooshing pattern. I could improve it by making it less spread out, into a tighter circle.
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