In class on Tuesday we went around critiquing everybody's projects. It's very interesting seeing everybody's perspective on your own project. I was told many good things about my Text As Texture. I am not sure on who critiqued mine, but I know it was a girl! She noted that I was the only person to use the actual newspaper to become 3D, which really made mine pop and stand out. She also said I had a great balance between black and white texts. It was very easy for her to tell that mine was closure and she also believed I picked the best texture for my final project. But I only got one negative statement, which was that the edges of my paper were slightly uneven. But other than that, she seemed to love it.
And I loved this part of our project. It was much more hands on, which is what i love...things that are more with designing than drawing. On top of the fact that I think I have an obsession with black and white things. I actually finished this project on a saturday!!! ya i couldn't believe it either! I started it earlier in the day and took a few breaks but i was obsessed with finishing it. And I finally did, and I am extremely happy with my results.
This is the front view of my Text As Texture. I ended up redoing my entire text part of this. I made it into an 8x8 sheet. I love how my text turned out. You can see only parts of words, and some are black, while some are white.
The side view of my project. I love the shadows it makes. I feel like it makes it very 3 dimensional, and jump off the page even more.
And finally a close up of my project. I used water bottle caps and pushpins. It looks like flowers trying to emerge from the caps.
My accordion book came out really cool! Gluing it was simple but making it into a nice square was a little more difficult. Especially for the textures I had made. Since i have 3D textures to begin with, it makes my book kind of lop sided :( but i fixed it as best as possible. I also added a little more on to it. I made a "front cover" and put a ribbon on it so it can be easily closed without it flopping open every five seconds. It ended up having 12 textures inside if it. And I feel like I definitely chose the best texture for my project.